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Monday, 8 September 2014
Tuesday, 11 February 2014
What is Word Stress?
In
English, we do not say each syllable with the same force or strength. In one
word, we accentuate ONE syllable. We say one syllable
very loudly (big, strong, important) and all the other
syllables very quietly.
Let's
take 3 words: photograph, photographer and photographic.
Do they sound the same when spoken? No. Because we accentuate (stress) ONE
syllable in each word. And it is not always the same syllable. So the shape of
each word is different.
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click word to hear
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shape
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total
syllables |
stressed
syllable |
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PHO TO GRAPH
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3
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#1
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PHO TO GRAPH ER
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4
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#2
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PHO TO GRAPH IC
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4
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#3
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This
happens in ALL words with 2 or more syllables: TEACHer, JaPAN, CHINa, aBOVE,
converSAtion, INteresting, imPORtant, deMAND, etCETera, etCETera, etCETera
The
syllables that are not stressed are weak or small or quiet.
Native speakers of English listen for the STRESSED syllables, not the weak
syllables. If you use word stress in your speech, you will instantly and
automatically improve your pronunciation and your comprehension.
Try
to hear the stress in individual words each time you listen to English - on the
radio, or in films for example. Your first step is to HEAR and recognise it.
After that, you can USE it!
There
are two very important rules about word stress:
- One
word, one stress. (One
word cannot have two stresses. So if you hear two stresses, you have heard
two words, not one word.)
- The
stress is always on a vowel.
Thursday, 31 October 2013
On Route or En Route?
This is another one of those cases that’s not a classic troublesome pair. Meaning one is correct and the other incorrect. The stems from people writing down what they think they have heard. Similar problems come up with Here! Here! versus Hear! Hear! and would of versus would have. I have started noticing these common errors a lot on social media. It might be that people simply just pen or type what they
think it might be hearing.
Incorrect: on route.
Correct: en route
Correct: en route
An incorrect usage does make
sense in a funny kind of way, and it sounds the same too, but, it in reality it isn’t!
So,
as we probably know, it means “on the way” to or from somewhere. It comes from
the French – 18th Century French, so it’s been around for long enough that it’s
stuck and isn’t likely to be that pliable. You can use on route, but
only in a very specific sense, when talking about named roads in places like
America. And then there’ll be a capital in the middle, and you’re not using it
in precisely the same way. So, “On Route 66 I found a lovely motel” –
fine. But in all other cases: “I was en route to Chicago when I happened
upon a charming hotel” – also fine.
This also applies to phrases like
en masse. If there’s an “on” sound and the other word looks like it might be
French, check it!
Friday, 16 August 2013
Idioms and Clichés
Many
people struggle with grasping these two concepts. Idioms and clichés are
two different things. While idioms
can be clichés and clichés can be
idioms, they must be kept separate.
So,
what is the difference between an idiom and a cliché?
An idiom is
an expression. Its meaning is not predictable from the usual grammatical rules
of a language or from the usual meanings of the expression's constituent
elements. Example, the expression kick
the bucket meaning “to die”
has nothing to do with kicking or buckets. However, the entire expression has a
set meaning that is familiar to most people. Idioms can be analysed with regards
to how idiomatic they are, and there is not necessarily agreement about whether
or not something is an idiom. The word “idiom” is usually positive, and people
use “idiom” to refer to expressions that they approve of but that are otherwise
problematic.
A cliché is a word or phrase that
has been overused to the point of having lost its freshness or vigour. It can
be a fashionable phrase (“at the end of the day...”), a proverb (“don't count
your chickens...”), a simile (“strong as an ox”), or a single word (“Whatever.”).
The word cliché is almost
always pejorative, and people are told to avoid them (“Avoid clichés like the
plague,” as one self-referential joke has it).
An
idiom can be a cliché. In fact, it’s likely that many idioms will be somewhat
clichéd. However, it does not have to be; and clichés are by no means always
idioms.
For
clichés, on the one hand, to overuse
that expression, one should try to avoid hackneyed language.
Idioms that are not clichés will rarely
bother anyone, as long as the meaning of the idiom is not ambiguous.
Tuesday, 28 May 2013
Sloppy Speech Habits
You may look good on paper
or in a suit but if you're looking to nail your big interview, looks aren't everything. How
you sound is often more important. Countless job seekers let careless speech
habits kill their chances of landing a job.
Here are six common
language mistakes and how to keep them from ruining your interview:
1. Nonwords
Filler words such as "um," "ah," "you know," "OK" or "like" tell the interviewer you're not prepared. A better strategy is to think before you speak, taking pauses and breaths when you lose your train of thought.
Filler words such as "um," "ah," "you know," "OK" or "like" tell the interviewer you're not prepared. A better strategy is to think before you speak, taking pauses and breaths when you lose your train of thought.
2. Up-Talk
A singsong or rising inflection at the end of every sentence creates a tentative impression and makes it sound as though you're asking a question instead of making a definitive statement. You need to speak with conviction when selling yourself in an interview.
A singsong or rising inflection at the end of every sentence creates a tentative impression and makes it sound as though you're asking a question instead of making a definitive statement. You need to speak with conviction when selling yourself in an interview.
3. Grammatical Errors
The interviewer may
question your education when
you use incorrect grammar/slang. Expressions such as “ain't,” “she don't,” and “me
& my friend” aren't appropriate. Be sure you speak in complete sentences
and that tenses agree.
4. Sloppy Speech
Slurring words together or
dropping their endings impairs the clarity of your message. To avoid slurring
and increase understanding, speak slowly during an interview. Some common
incorrect pronunciations include "aks" for "ask,"
"ath-a-lete" for "athlete," "wif" for
"with" and "dree" for "three."
5. Speed Talking
While everybody is a bit
anxious during an interview, you don't want your information to fly by like a
speeding bullet. A rapid speaking rate is difficult to follow, and speed talkers
are seen as nervous. Slow down your racing heart by doing some breathing
exercises before the interview. Avoid rushing, listen to the question, and then
count two beats in your head before answering. When you finish a sentence,
count two beats again before continuing. Don't be afraid of silence. Pausing is
an effective communication technique.
6. Weak Speak
Wimpy words modify or water
down your conviction and in the end your position. When you pepper a
conversation with "hopefully," "perhaps," "I
feel," "kind of" and "sort of," the message you convey
is a lack of confidence. Use power words such as "I'm confident that,"
"my track record shows," "I take the position that,"
"I recommend" or "my goal is."
You don't have to study elocution to speak well. Simply slow down, take
time to pronounce all the syllables and leave slang at home.
Tuesday, 23 October 2012
Ellipsis
You see it everywhere, but most people
don’t know what it’s called or how to use it properly.
Correct:
Also Incorrect:
Also Correct:
Also Correct:
Luckily,
the ellipsis isn’t nearly as confusing as the comma. It’s relatively easy to
learn how to use it correctly and how to refer to it properly.
An
ellipsis is a series of three points with spaces between them (. . .)
Definition
An ellipsis – the omission of a word,
phrase, line, paragraph, or more from a quoted passage — is indicated by
ellipsis points (or dots)… Ellipsis points are three spaced periods ( . . . ),
sometimes preceded or followed by other punctuation.
Singular and Plural
The word ellipsis is not plural. In other words, it refers to the three points, together, as a single unit, which is often colloquially referred to as dots or periods. Here is an ellipsis:
The word ellipsis is not plural. In other words, it refers to the three points, together, as a single unit, which is often colloquially referred to as dots or periods. Here is an ellipsis:
( . . . )
The
plural of ellipsis is ellipses. This would indicate more than one
set of three dots:
( . . . ) ( . . . ) ( . . . )
This punctuation mark may also be called a suspension
point, points of ellipsis, or periods of ellipsis. But to keep things
simple, let’s just stick with the word ellipsis.
Omissions
The ellipsis is primarily used to indicate an omission. It can be
an intentional omission, such as when you are using a quotation but want to
skip over a portion of it.
Example:
The name of a minor in a legal case.
Purpose of the Ellipsis
It
is inserted into a quotation/speech to indicate the omission of text from an
original quotation.
Rules
There
are quite a few simple rules for the proper use of ellipses, which are used
more often in legal writing than most forms of writing (Yes, I have come across
this far too many times). Failure to use the proper form of an ellipsis could
misrepresent the work of another person and result in legal liability for the
writer. Correct use of ellipses, on the other hand, shows that the writer has
carefully attended to detail, and thus increases the reader's confidence in the
reliability of the written work.
Go through these for a better understanding:
1.
When placing an ellipsis in the middle of a quotation to
indicate the omission of material, use three points with spaces before and
after the ellipsis.
Incorrect: “The First Amendment
provides that ‘Congress shall make no law respecting. . .the right of the
people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the Government for a redress of
grievances’.”
Correct: “The First Amendment provides that ‘Congress
shall make no law respecting . . . the right of the people peaceably to
assemble, and to petition the Government for a redress of grievances’.”
2.
When placing an ellipsis at the end of a quotation to
indicate the omission of material, use four points -- a three-point ellipsis
and a period. The ellipsis should follow a blank space.
Incorrect: “The First Amendment
provides that Congress shall make no law. . . abridging the freedom of
speech. . .”
Correct: “The First Amendment
provides that Congress shall make no law . . . abridging the freedom of
speech . . . .”
3.
When omitting one or more entire paragraphs, indicate the
omission by indenting four points and placing them on a separate line. If the
quoted material is 50 words or more, use indented margins and do not use any
quotation marks.
Incorrect:
“Poverty imposes costs on the non-poor that
warrant, on strictly economic grounds and without regard to ethical or
political considerations, incurring some costs to reduce it. For example,
poverty in the midst of a generally wealthy society is likely to increase the
incidence of crime: the forgone income of a legitimate alternative occupation
is low for someone who has little earning capacity in legitimate occupations,
while the proximity of wealth increases the expected return from crime, or,
stated another way, the cost of honesty. . . . An individual who feels
endangered or appalled at the poverty around him can contribute to an
organisation designed to alleviate that poverty an amount equal to the benefit
that he would derive from the reduction of poverty enabled by his contribution
(net of administrative costs).”
Correct:
“Poverty imposes costs on the non-poor that
warrant, on strictly economic grounds and without regard to ethical or
political considerations, incurring some costs to reduce it. For example,
poverty
. . . .
An individual who feels endangered or appalled
at the poverty around him can contribute to an organisation designed to
alleviate that poverty.”
4. Never leave a
point in an ellipsis floating at the beginning or end of a line of text.
(However, you may have a period at the end of a fully quoted sentence at the
end of a line of text and begin the ellipsis on the next line.)
Incorrect: "His refusal to cooperate with the
court and name the source .
. . resulted in a contempt citation."
. . resulted in a contempt citation."
Also Incorrect:
"His refusal to cooperate with the court
and name the source . .
. resulted in a contempt citation."
. resulted in a contempt citation."
Correct: "His refusal to cooperate with
the court and name the source . . .
resulted in a contempt citation."
resulted in a contempt citation."
Also Correct:
"His refusal to cooperate with the court
and name the source
. . . resulted in a contempt citation."
. . . resulted in a contempt citation."
Also Correct:
"The period may properly be placed at the
end of a sentence.
. . . The ellipsis may then be placed on the following line, indicating the omission of an intervening sentence."
. . . The ellipsis may then be placed on the following line, indicating the omission of an intervening sentence."
The Semicolon in Modern times
The Semicolon use appears
to have been declining in recent years, possibly because fewer and fewer people
are confident about the proper role of this punctuation mark. Here are several
ways to use the semicolon as an effective tool for enhancing clarity and
emphasis in your writing.
1. Use a semicolon as a soft period. By using a semicolon instead of a period between
two sentences, you show that those two sentences have a closer relationship to
each other than they do to the sentences around them. The semicolon, in a
sense, connects the sentences. (If you added a coordinating conjunction and a
comma, you would show less of a connection; and with a period you show only the
connection of proximity.)
2. Use a semicolon to connect main clauses
containing internal punctuation. Think of a comma as a brief pause, a semicolon as a more moderate
pause, and a period as a stop, and you can see the logic of the hierarchy.
·
When
he faints through desire, she comes to his aid; but when he revives, she scorns
him.
·
Whatever
is left in the hands of chance must be subject to vicissitude; and when any
establishment is found to be useful, it ought to be the next care to make it
permanent.
·
The
events we experience are less important than the meaning we give to them; for
life is about meaning, not experience.
I hope that this piece was helpful, Grace. Thank you very much for your email. Do hope to hear from you again.
Monday, 27 August 2012
Semicolon
Semicolons
help you connect closely related ideas when a style mark stronger than a comma
is needed. By using semicolons effectively, you can make your
writing sound
more sophisticated.
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The semicolon is a punctuation mark with several uses. While terminal marks like full stops, exclamation marks, and question marks, mark the end of a sentence, the semicolon is normally a sentence internal, making it a secondary boundary mark. Semicolons are intermediate in between terminal marks; their strength is equal to that of the colon.
Semicolons are followed by a lower case letter, unless that letter is the first letter of a proper noun like the word I or Paris.
Why should one use a semicolon?
The main task of the semicolon is to mark a break that is stronger than a comma but not as final as a full stop. It’s used between two main clauses that balance each other and are too closely linked to be made into separate sentences, as in these two examples:
You can also use a semicolon as a stronger division in a sentence that already contains commas:- The road runs through a beautiful wooded valley; the railway line follows it.
- An art director searched North Africa; I went to the Canary Islands.
- The study showed the following: 76% of surveyed firms monitor employee Web-surfing activities, with 65% blocking access to unauthorised Internet locations; over one-third of the firms monitor employee computer keystrokes; half reported storing and reviewing employee emails; 57% monitor employee telephone behaviour, including the inappropriate use of voice mail.
Why use a semicolon instead of a full stop?
The semi-colon is used in a sentence when there is a pause which is longer than a comma, but shorter than a full stop. A semi-colon can be used instead of a full stop when the two parts of the sentence are too closely related in meaning to be put into separate sentences.
- We did not go into the theatre before our friends arrived; instead, we waited outside.
Semi-colons can also be used between items on a list, when the items consist of a number of words, or when the use of commas alone would be confusing.
- The committee consisted of Carol Jones, the staff representative; Bill Johnson, the boss; Terry Smith, the local doctor; Murray Todd, the fisherman; and Mary Renshaw, the cook.
A semicolon can also be used before a transition (connecting) word or phrase. The transition words you are probably most familiar with include however, therefore, hence, thus, consequently, nevertheless and meanwhile.
- It was the best of times; however, it was also the worst of times.
Semicolon usage
Link two independent clauses to connect closely related ideas.
- Some people write with a word processor; others write with a pen or pencil.
Link clauses connected by conjunctive adverbs or transitional phrases to connect closely related ideas.
- But however they choose to write, people are allowed to make their own decisions; as a result, many people swear by their writing methods.
Link lists where the items contain commas to avoid confusion between list items.
- There are basically two ways to write: with a pen or pencil, which is inexpensive and easily accessible; or by computer and printer, which is more expensive but quick and neat.
Link lengthy clauses or clauses with commas to avoid confusion between clauses.
- Some people write with a word processor, typewriter, or a computer; but others, for different reasons, choose to write with a pen or pencil.
Avoid using a comma when a semicolon is needed:
- Incorrect: The cow is brown, it is also old.
- Correct: The cow is brown; it is also old.
Friday, 17 August 2012
Cover letters
What is a cover letter?
To be considered for almost any position, you will need to write a
letter of application. Such a letter introduces you, explains the purpose of
your application, highlights your experiences, and requests an opportunity to
meet with the potential employer. We refer to this important piece of material
as a Cover Letter.
Precisely because this letter is your introduction to an employer,
and because first impressions count, you should take great care to write an
impressive and effective letter. Remember that the letter not only tells of
your accomplishments but also reveals how effectively you can communicate.
How to format a cover letter
·
Type each letter individually,
or use a word processor.
·
Use good quality bond paper.
·
Whenever possible, address each
employer by name and title.
·
Each letter should be
grammatically correct, properly punctuated, and have perfect spelling. It also
should be immaculately clean and free of errors. Proofread carefully!
·
Use conventional business
correspondence form. If you are not certain of how to do this, ask for help.
What to include in a cover letter
·
Try to limit your letter to a
single page. Be succinct.
·
Assess the employer’s needs versus
your skills. Then try to match them, in the letter, in a way that will appeal
to the employer’s self-interest.
·
Tailor your letter to each job
opportunity. Demonstrate knowledge of the organisation to which you are
applying.
·
Write in a style that is mature
but clear; avoid long and intricate sentences and paragraphs; avoid jargon.
·
Use action verbs and the active
voice; convey confidence, optimism, and enthusiasm coupled with respect and
professionalism.
·
Show some personality, but
avoid hard-sell, gimmicky, or unorthodox letters.
·
Arrange the points in a logical
sequence; organise each paragraph around a main point.
Opening paragraph
·
State why you are writing. Establish
a point of contact (Ex. advertisement in a specific place for a specific
position).
·
Give a brief idea of who you
are (Ex. a recent PhD in History).
·
Highlight a few of the most
salient points from your enclosed resume that are important for the position
you are seeking.
·
Show how your education and
experience suit the requirements of the position.
·
State how you could contribute
to the organisation.
Closing paragraph
·
Stress action. Politely request
an interview at the employer's convenience.
·
Offer to provide additional
information (Ex. a portfolio, a writing sample, a dossier, an audition tape).
·
Thank the reader for his/her
consideration and indicate that you are looking forward to hearing from
him/her.
Questions to guide your writing
·
Who this letter targeted at?
·
What is my objective?
·
What are the objectives and
needs of the person/people reading this?
·
How can I best express my
objective in relationship to the employer’s objectives and needs?
·
What specific benefits can I
offer to the employer and how can I best express them?
·
What opening sentence and
paragraph will grab the attention of my employer in a positive manner?
·
How can I maintain the interest
and desire of a potential employer throughout the letter?
·
What closing paragraph will ensure
the reader of my capabilities and persuade him/her to contact me?
·
Is the letter my best
professional effort?
·
Have I spent sufficient time
drafting, revising, and proofreading the letter?
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Monday, 13 August 2012
Proofreading
Proofreading
means examining your text carefully to find and correct typographical errors
and mistakes in grammar, style, and spelling. Here are some tips.
·
Be sure you've revised the larger aspects of
your text. Don't make corrections at the sentence and word level if you
still need to work on the focus, organisation, and development of the whole
paper, of sections, or of paragraphs.
·
Set your text aside for a while between writing and proofing. Some distance from the text
will help you see mistakes more easily.
·
Eliminate unnecessary words before looking for
mistakes.
·
Know what to look for. From the comments of
your professors or a writing centre instructor on past papers, make a list of
mistakes you need to watch for.
·
Work from a printout, not the computer
screen.
·
Read out loud. This is especially helpful
for spotting run-on sentences, but you'll also hear other problems that you may
not see when reading silently.
·
Use a blank sheet of paper to cover up the lines
below the one you're reading. This technique keeps you from skipping ahead
of possible mistakes.
·
Use the search function of the computer to find
mistakes you're likely to make. Search for "it," for instance,
if you confuse "its" and "it's;" for "-ing" if
dangling modifiers are a problem; for opening parentheses or quote marks if you
tend to leave out the closing ones.
·
If you tend to make many mistakes, check
separately for each kind of error, moving from the most to the least important,
and following whatever technique works best for you to identify that kind of
mistake.
For instance, read through once (backwards, sentence by sentence) to check for fragments; read through again (forward) to be sure subjects and verbs agree, and again (perhaps using a computer search for "this," "it," and "they") to trace pronouns to antecedents.
For instance, read through once (backwards, sentence by sentence) to check for fragments; read through again (forward) to be sure subjects and verbs agree, and again (perhaps using a computer search for "this," "it," and "they") to trace pronouns to antecedents.
· Always BEGIN and END with a computer spell check. But remember that a spell checker won't catch mistakes with homonyms (e.g.,
"they're," "their," "there") or certain typos
(like "he" for "the").
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